Carerell's Story page 2

wel in my opinion i think you should of spent a little more time planning and organising, maybe the story line should be made a bit more apparent to improve the impact.
the idea of course is lovely but the backgrounds could have been a little more detailed. the layering of the trees are great!
the eyes are good because to the 3dness it shows. i think that makes the eyes quite bold and striking <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/b/r/b…" alt="" title="bravoplz"/> the body shape of the older cat is quite impressing. if you added texture to the fur it would improve quite considerably. good job ! the main focus of improvement would be moe details <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/i/l/i…" alt="" title="ilikeitplz"/>